Script Writing

Script Writing

First take on writing the script for our trailer.

17/10/13
MWE

JORDAN AND AND JANE IN THE WAREHOUSE - [Belly of the whale (2)] 

-CREDITS-

-BLACK-

-CUT TO SHORT CLIP OF JANE BREATHLESS AND RESTLESS-

-CUT TO A CLOSE UP- 

JANE: "NO!"

JANE: "NO PLEASE!" 

-CUT TO A MEDIUM SHOT-

JANE: *CRYING*

-CUT TO OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT FROM JORDAN POV AS HE'S WALKING TOWARDS HER-

JANE: "THEY WILL FIND ME YOU KNOW! THEY WILL FIND THIS MISERABLE STINKING HOLE OF YOURS! FUCK!"

JANE: *CONSTANT CRYING AND WHIMPERING FROM PAIN*

JANE: NO PLEASE DO-

-JORDAN PULLS HER HAIR EXPOSING HER THROAT-

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LINK BETWEEN GEORGE AND JORDAN- [Supernatural aid] 

-CUT TO AN ESTABLISHING SHOT FROM THE BACK OF THE CLASSROOM-

-CUT TO A MEDIUM CLOSE UP TO THE TEACHER- 

TEACHER: "TODAY WE PICK UP ON THE CHARACTERIZATION OF PIGGY AND HIS SIGNIFICANCE IN THE WHOLE NOVEL"

-CUTS TO A TILT UP TO JORDAN FIDGETING, THE DIEGETIC SOUND OF THE CLASSROOM IS CONSTANT-  

-CUTS TO A MEDIUM CLOSE UP OF IVY BEHIND JORDAN, LEANING FORWARD OBSERVING JORDAN-

-IVY'S BODY RELAXES AS CLIP STARTS-

-CUT'S TO PROJECTION OF THE FILM-

DIEGETIC SOUND: "KILL THE PIG! CUT HIS THROAT! SPILL HIS BLOOD!" - CHANTING

-QUICK CUTS BETWEEN JORDAN AND PROJECTION- 

JORDAN: EXCUSE ME... 

-LONG SHOT ABRUPTLY WALKS OUT-

-CUTS TO IVY LOOKING AT THE DOOR OF THE CLASS ROOM-

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JANE AND JORDAN'S CHEMISTRY [Call to adventure]

-CLASS: MEDIUM SHOT OF JANE AND JORDAN'S CASUAL INTERACTION, FRIENDLY TO ESTABLISH THEIR DYNAMIC- 

-ON TOP-

JANE: HE'S NICE...

IVY: YEA...? YOU GUYS ARE GETTING ALONG WELL

JANE: YEA WE ARE...HE'S ACTUALLY HAVING A PARTY AND HE INVITED ME AND I SAID I CAN HAVE A PLUS ONE... AND I WAS THINKING MAYBE YOU- 

IVY: NO

-CUT TO MEDIUM SHOT TRACK OF JANE AND AND IVY WALKING- 

JANE: HE'S NICE...

IVY: YEA...? YOU GUYS ARE GETTING ALONG WELL

JANE: YEA WE ARE...HE'S ACTUALLY HAVING A PARTY AND HE INVITED ME AND SAID I CAN HAVE A PLUS ONE... AND I WAS THINKING MAYBE YOU- 

IVY: NO

JANE: IVY...

IVY: NOPE.

JANE: OH COME ON! *WHINES* WE'LL HAVE FUN! 

IVY: NO!

JANE: *STOPS WALKING FACING IVY* WHY NOT?!

IVY: *TURNS TO IVY, MAKES HAND GESTURES AS EXPLAINING* TO BECAUSE WE'VE BEEN THROUGH THINGS LIKE THIS BEFORE! YOU END UP CRYING OVER SOME PRICK YOU'RE SMITTEN OVER... AND I END UP MISSING "GREYS ANATOMY" CAUSE I HAVE TO WATCH THE "NOTEBOOK" WITH YOU FOR THE NTH TIME WHILE I COMFORT YOUR SOBBING ASS!! *STARTS WALKING AGAIN, LEAVING JANE*

JANE: HEY! THAT'S NOT TRUE!! *RUNS UP TO CATCH UP WITH IVY*

IVY: OH REALLY? *STOPS FACING JANE, GRINNING MOCKINGLY*

JANE: YES!

IVY: WELL D'YOU REMEMBER THAT TIME??

JANE: WHICH TIME..?

IVY: EXACTLY! THERE'S BEEN FAR TO MANY TIMES JANE! *RELEASES AN EXASPERATED LAUGH*

JANE: HEY THAT NOT FAR!! HEY! THIS IS DIFFERENT! HE'S DIFFERENT! 

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PARTY[Crossing the first threshold]

-COLLECTION OF CLIPS OF THE PARTY HAND HELD, PANS, IVY'S POV-

-CUT TO IVY EMERGING FROM THE CROWD-

IVY: *HOLDING A DOCUMENT DOCTORS REPORT* OH.. HE'S DIFFERENT ALRIGHT...

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FURTHER DISTURBING REVELATION ABOUT JORDAN [Meeting with the goddess/Woman as temptress]-

-IVY DRINKING COFFEE TALKING TO ANOTHER FRIEND- 

IVY: SOMETHING'S JUST.. NOT... RIGHT... *SIPS COFFEE*

-CUTS TO JORDAN'S BEDROOM, ANIMAL DISSECTING-

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IVY'S RESEARCH [Road of trials]-

-CUT TO NEWS ARTICLE- 

-CUTS TO IVY READING-

IVY: SHIT... I KNEW IT....

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