Script Writing
First take on writing the script for our trailer.
17/10/13
MWE
JORDAN
AND AND JANE IN THE WAREHOUSE - [Belly of the whale (2)]
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-BLACK-
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TO SHORT CLIP OF JANE BREATHLESS AND RESTLESS-
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TO A CLOSE UP-
JANE: "NO!"
JANE: "NO
PLEASE!"
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TO A MEDIUM SHOT-
JANE:
*CRYING*
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TO OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT FROM JORDAN POV AS HE'S WALKING TOWARDS HER-
JANE: "THEY WILL FIND
ME YOU KNOW! THEY WILL FIND THIS MISERABLE STINKING HOLE OF YOURS! FUCK!"
JANE:
*CONSTANT CRYING AND WHIMPERING FROM PAIN*
JANE: NO PLEASE DO-
-JORDAN
PULLS HER HAIR EXPOSING HER THROAT-
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LINK
BETWEEN GEORGE AND JORDAN- [Supernatural aid]
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TO AN ESTABLISHING SHOT FROM THE BACK OF THE CLASSROOM-
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TO A MEDIUM CLOSE UP TO THE TEACHER-
TEACHER: "TODAY WE PICK
UP ON THE CHARACTERIZATION OF PIGGY AND HIS SIGNIFICANCE IN THE WHOLE
NOVEL"
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TO A TILT UP TO JORDAN FIDGETING, THE DIEGETIC SOUND OF THE CLASSROOM IS
CONSTANT-
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TO A MEDIUM CLOSE UP OF IVY BEHIND JORDAN, LEANING FORWARD OBSERVING JORDAN-
-IVY'S
BODY RELAXES AS CLIP STARTS-
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TO PROJECTION OF THE FILM-
DIEGETIC
SOUND: "KILL THE PIG! CUT HIS THROAT! SPILL HIS BLOOD!" - CHANTING
-QUICK
CUTS BETWEEN JORDAN AND PROJECTION-
JORDAN: EXCUSE ME...
-LONG
SHOT ABRUPTLY WALKS OUT-
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TO IVY LOOKING AT THE DOOR OF THE CLASS ROOM-
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JANE
AND JORDAN'S CHEMISTRY [Call to adventure]
-CLASS:
MEDIUM SHOT OF JANE AND JORDAN'S CASUAL INTERACTION, FRIENDLY TO ESTABLISH
THEIR DYNAMIC-
-ON
TOP-
JANE:
HE'S NICE...
IVY: YEA...? YOU GUYS ARE
GETTING ALONG WELL
JANE: YEA WE ARE...HE'S
ACTUALLY HAVING A PARTY AND HE INVITED ME AND I SAID I CAN HAVE A PLUS ONE...
AND I WAS THINKING MAYBE YOU-
IVY:
NO
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TO MEDIUM SHOT TRACK OF JANE AND AND IVY WALKING-
JANE: HE'S NICE...
IVY: YEA...? YOU GUYS ARE
GETTING ALONG WELL
JANE: YEA WE ARE...HE'S
ACTUALLY HAVING A PARTY AND HE INVITED ME AND SAID I CAN HAVE A PLUS ONE... AND
I WAS THINKING MAYBE YOU-
IVY: NO
JANE: IVY...
IVY: NOPE.
JANE: OH COME ON! *WHINES*
WE'LL HAVE FUN!
IVY: NO!
JANE:
*STOPS WALKING FACING IVY* WHY NOT?!
IVY:
*TURNS TO IVY, MAKES HAND GESTURES AS EXPLAINING* TO BECAUSE WE'VE BEEN THROUGH THINGS LIKE THIS
BEFORE! YOU END UP CRYING OVER SOME PRICK YOU'RE SMITTEN OVER... AND I END UP
MISSING "GREYS ANATOMY" CAUSE I HAVE TO WATCH THE
"NOTEBOOK" WITH YOU FOR THE NTH TIME WHILE I COMFORT YOUR SOBBING
ASS!! *STARTS WALKING AGAIN, LEAVING
JANE*
JANE: HEY! THAT'S NOT
TRUE!! *RUNS UP TO CATCH UP WITH IVY*
IVY: OH REALLY? *STOPS FACING JANE, GRINNING MOCKINGLY*
JANE: YES!
IVY: WELL D'YOU
REMEMBER THAT TIME??
JANE: WHICH TIME..?
IVY: EXACTLY! THERE'S
BEEN FAR TO MANY TIMES JANE! *RELEASES AN
EXASPERATED LAUGH*
JANE: HEY THAT NOT FAR!!
HEY! THIS IS DIFFERENT! HE'S DIFFERENT!
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PARTY[Crossing
the first threshold]
-COLLECTION
OF CLIPS OF THE PARTY HAND HELD, PANS, IVY'S POV-
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TO IVY EMERGING FROM THE CROWD-
IVY:
*HOLDING A DOCUMENT DOCTORS REPORT* OH.. HE'S DIFFERENT
ALRIGHT...
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FURTHER DISTURBING REVELATION ABOUT
JORDAN [Meeting with the goddess/Woman as temptress]-
-IVY
DRINKING COFFEE TALKING TO ANOTHER FRIEND-
IVY: SOMETHING'S JUST..
NOT... RIGHT... *SIPS COFFEE*
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TO JORDAN'S BEDROOM, ANIMAL DISSECTING-
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IVY'S
RESEARCH [Road of trials]-
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TO NEWS ARTICLE-
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TO IVY READING-
IVY: SHIT... I KNEW
IT....
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QUICK
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